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I love this! The lighting is wonderfully done. Mixed with the forest effects and the blurring, it really brings the whole scene to life...


I like it. Her pose demonstrates an air of confidence. The way you angled her legs to be slightly spread but parallel to her torso allo...

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Never done one of these before, so if I don't address certain things as well as I should have, let me know. Anyways, I only have a coup...

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I love this!

The lighting is wonderfully done. Mixed with the forest effects and the blurring, it really brings the whole scene to life and gives it this mystical kind of feeling, as if the forest is alive.

Her outfit is revealing and sexy but not to the point of obscenity. There isn't needless nudity like many other images out there, as her outfit reflects her druidic nature, so to say. The tattoos really compliment the look too and add to the mystery of who this character is.

The horns, staff, and owl all combine nicely, giving the scene just the right amount of pieces without overcrowding it.

Overall, a great piece that I think really conveys the uniqueness and vibrancy of the character.
I like it. Her pose demonstrates an air of confidence. The way you angled her legs to be slightly spread but parallel to her torso allows her body to say something along the lines of "I'm ready!". She seems prepared, determined, and certain.

Her armour is done well, kind of plain looking but still detailed enough to give it sturdiness. Her weapon is cool, but I think the angle of the hammer is incorrect considering her pose. If her hands are almost right up against her body, then the hammer's natural position would be to run in the same direction as her legs, thus making the top of the hammer head visible. To me, it looks like the bottom of the hammer head is visible, which, in order for that to be plausible, would require her left arm to be out and her elbow bent at an awkward angle.

The background is good as well, however, and displays depth that the image needs. Overall, nicely done, but could use a few tweaks to perfect it.
Never done one of these before, so if I don't address certain things as well as I should have, let me know.

Anyways, I only have a couple concerns regarding the image, mostly to do with the physical characteristics of the image.
1. Either the cow is quite small or the girl is quite large, considering the scale of the two. I'm not sure if this is something you could clarify in your description (perhaps it being a calf, not fully grown, for example).

2. The girl's right leg seems to be too small in my opinion. It doesn't seem bent enough to equate to the left leg if it were fully extended. Her left leg does seem to be in proportion to her overall body, however, so that's good.

3. The cow's second leg (from L to R) does not look exactly right, but that's a small complaint.

Besides those things, I like the girl's outfit and her sort of nonchalance in regard to riding a cow. It shows personality and direction in your work.

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